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09-12-2016 07:47 PM
09-12-2016 07:47 PM
Poem - "Let Me Go"
Let Me Go...
You don't know me
But I know you
I am nothing
I am not here
But you are
You can’t see me
But I can see you
You can’t see my misery or my agony
You see colours
You laugh
You taste
I don't
No, actually I do
I see misery, torture, black, black and more black
I taste sour and bitter
I do laugh, but only to hide my tears
You recall good memories
You plan your future
I don’t remember my past
And I don’t want any future
Both ends are black
Both are sealed
I am squeezed in-between
This is my life
Always in-between
Between misery and agony
Between black and black
Between death and death
Between no-where and no-where
Is that life?
I am not here
Or there
I don't exist
Or I wish I didn’t
Who is enjoying my misery?
Why don't you let me go?
You like it here, I don't
I really tried to stay
I wanted to be like you
And you tried to help me be you
I failed, and so did you
Please, let me go...
I won’t tell them what you did to me
I don't, actually, remember anything
I can only see black, black, and more black
Please, let me go...
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09-12-2016 08:26 PM
09-12-2016 08:26 PM
Re: Poem - "Let Me Go"
hello @bha
how are you feeling?
just wanting to express yourself?
I am not an expert but i am a good listener.
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09-12-2016 08:36 PM
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10-12-2016 11:34 AM
10-12-2016 11:34 AM
Re: Poem - "Let Me Go"
Yes, I just wanted to express myself.
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10-12-2016 11:34 AM
10-12-2016 11:34 AM
Re: Poem - "Let Me Go"
Thank you for asking.
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10-12-2016 02:12 PM
10-12-2016 02:12 PM
Re: Poem - "Let Me Go"
hello @bha
I haven't met you on here before as I am fairly new.
I was concerned and am relieved that you are ok.
Thank goodness we can express ourselves on here. It helps so much doesn't it. It doesn't cure but is nice to know that people care enough to respond.
Take care my friend.